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Neil Davies's avatar
Neil Davies
  • Adventure
  • Crime
  • Teen
morriss003's avatar
morriss003
  • Drama
  • Teen
  • Sci-fi
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Ivy Devi
  • Drama
  • Romance
  • Teen
  • livelaughlove avatar

    So is one a girl and the other a boy?

  • Ivy Devi avatar

    Pia Lou and thank you very much ^-^

  • Ivy Devi avatar

    Pia Lou I might do that!

  • Pia Lou avatar

    Great teen lit! Are you going to make it a longer piece?

Joseph Wilson's avatar
Joseph Wilson
  • Literary
  • Drama
  • Teen
Invisible Black Sheep's avatar
Invisible Black Sheep
  • Romance
  • Teen
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TurnOffTheLights
  • Adventure
  • Drama
  • Teen
  • jeff mantel avatar

    Great narrative voice TurnOffTheLights, and quite the cliffhanger; when can we expect more?

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Redheaded_Dancer
  • Diary
  • Teen
  • jeff mantel avatar

    A little difficult to read when the paragraphs stop being broken up Redheaded_Dancer

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Redheaded_Dancer
  • Literary
  • Diary
  • Teen
Redheaded_Dancer's avatar
Redheaded_Dancer
  • Diary
  • Family
  • Teen
Jay Duret's avatar
Jay Duret
  • Comedy
  • Family
  • Teen
eLoy's avatar
eLoy
  • Family
  • Teen
  • Poetry
  • jeff mantel avatar

    Touching piece eLoy although the rhythm is a little off in places, as is the grammar

  • Hannah Marie avatar

    Lovely poem eLoy. You express your point well.

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Gary Le
  • Adventure
  • Romance
  • Teen
  • jeff mantel avatar

    Rather a lot to read in one chapter but good writing Gary Le

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Oak Leaf Ninja
  • Drama
  • Romance
  • Teen
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abby lee
  • Alternative
  • Literary
  • Teen
  • jeff mantel avatar

    Very creepy and nasty but great writing abby lee (I like your avatar as well, good old TG)

  • abby lee avatar

    Jenny-Rose thanks again!

  • abby lee avatar

    Pia Lou thanks! and, not really, no - any particular piece i should start with?

  • Jenny-Rose avatar

    Good use of the internal monologue here abby lee.

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Miz Zesolia
  • Diary
  • Teen
  • Spiritual
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Meg Lorraine
  • Comedy
  • Romance
  • Teen
  • jeff mantel avatar

    A fine, dramatic ending to the story Meg Lorraine. What do you have in mind now that it is finished?

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Rika Royu
  • Teen
  • Jenny-Rose avatar

    Very honest and open story Rika Royu

  • Pia Lou avatar

    Touching story, Rika Royu. Gender does not matter: I love people in general!

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Crash Dummy
  • Adventure
  • Drama
  • Teen
  • Jenny-Rose avatar

    Great start Crash Dummy, can't wait for the next update!

  • Pia Lou avatar

    Great fan fiction, Crash Dummy!

  • Crash Dummy avatar

    Remember that this is only the first chapter and I will be updating every 1-2 weeks. Enjoy

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Anni1212
  • Fantasy
  • Romance
  • Teen
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morriss003
  • Drama
  • Teen
  • Sci-fi
  • morriss003 avatar

    jeff mantel thank you. This relationship was one of the reasons I enjoyed writing this book.

  • jeff mantel avatar

    Another good installment morriss003

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fightergirl14
  • Drama
  • Romance
  • Teen
  • jeff mantel avatar

    Could definitely be expanded upon, interesting beginning fightergirl14

  • Alex Hamilton avatar

    Compelling stuff, very well done.

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Lora Zhang
  • Drama
  • Teen
  • Thriller
  • Lora Zhang avatar

    Thank you Topaz Miuki for the read. Glad you liked it!

  • Lora Zhang avatar

    Thank you Guy for your encouraging words. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

  • Lora Zhang avatar

    Thank you KateDaniela for the read. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

  • Topaz Miuki avatar

    That was a really interesting story. Good job

  • Lora Zhang avatar

    Sheepyblue thank you for pointing out the mistakes. I've edited it. Glad you liked the story!

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    zenbear thank you for read. I'm glad you liked the story!

  • zenbear avatar

    I can't say I was expecting that ending, but it was beautiful none the less. Thank you for such a lovely story!

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Halilou styzle
  • Comedy
  • Mystery
  • Teen
  • jeff mantel avatar

    Very odd Halilou styzle

  • Jenny-Rose avatar

    Loved the story! It has such an off-beat sense of humour that is rare in prose. Keep it up!

  • LianneGraziella avatar

    Absolutely crazy story. I love it!

  • KateDaniela avatar

    Haha, a very funny short story. Well done!

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GlenDeakin
  • Adventure
  • Teen
  • Sci-fi
  • jeff mantel avatar

    Another imaginative, well-written chapter GlenDeakin

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