If anybody is interested in reading my grandfathers journal let me know. It is posted online at the WW2 museums website :)

Joey T Thanks so much Joey!!!

Dramatic and well-realised Gold.dust.0523, although there are a few grammatical errors here and there

A noble poem that's as relevant as ever, I think.

Nice idea Kamal Jit Singh but the formatting still needs to be fixed

Thanks Joey.......

Interesting concept - the use of a bold font isn't necessary but that can be rectified easily enough, good job!

Striking, impressionistic stuff Kelly Jean Rice

Interesting style - a lot of room for interpretation! Liked the use of reptition too. Thanks!

Dark stuff Kelly Jean Rice

Great little poem! Really quirky! Just be careful with some typo's, like 'ALive' and 'I'de'. But I still enjoyed reading this - keep it up!

Striking with its raw imagery Kelly Jean Rice

Needs a proofread but that final repeated line is fantastic Kelly Jean Rice

I appreciated your choice to isolate some words on a separate line, because it's not too long a poem it really improved it! Great idea.

Very engaging Kelly Jean Rice

Liked the repetition at the end! Just one thing, is the second line the corect phrasing? You've got a good style of writing.

This has a cool frantic feel that really draws me in. Great piece.

Needs a proofread but you have a very unique, strong voice Kelly Jean Rice

Again, another brilliant poem. I love the repetition of 'the thick' near the end, and the line 'One breath determines I am still here'

Intense as always Kelly Jean Rice

Very strong words. thank you for sharing them.

Liked the erratic style of this!

As usual, I love your work!

Some especially striking imagery in this one Kelly Jean Rice

Well thought out and well worth the read - thanks for sharing.

Interesting poem, I particularly like the last two lines.

Joey T Thank you so much!!!!

I nice quick read, thanks for the poem Odin Roark

Lyrical polemic Odin Roark

Moving story, Peter Nunis. The old man's life and perspective were very touching!

An interesting, sad character Peter Nunis. Is rather in need of a proofread, however.

Really pleasant story, love the concept of addressing the cat as an individual. Their demanding nature is what makes them so loveable!

Funny stuff, this! Cats are arrogant punks. But maybe that's why we love them so much. I like this story. Thanks for sharing.

Love this - very funny story and an excellent perspective of the common household cat!

Amusing story, I enjoyed it

Quirky and funny little story. I love the off-beat humour in this!

Very emotionally driven and well written, thanks for sharing!

A well written piece again B. B. Sue. Was very sad to read.

A sad piece but very well written B. B. Sue

Claire LeBear, thank you. Nice to see you like it :)

Such a lovely and sad tale. I may not be a critic or anything of the sort, but I think this story is just so beautifully written...

Not sure the repetition works for me in places, but an evocative piece nonetheless J.A. Santos

Really enjoyed this! I found myself reading this out loud to myself because of the repetition of the sounds throughout the poem. Good job!

Interesting poem.

Melissa Smith Thank you so very very much. Keep coming back.

I really enjoyed this, you have a great voice.

Hannah Marie Boys will be boys, right? But then girls will be girls. Really happy that you enjoyed it.

Love this story, you can really feel the woman's pain.

Hannah Marie thankyou :) appreciate it

thank you for the comments :) I'm glad I got the emotions across, thank you very much for the feedback

This is a touching and sad story. It is a shame that, by becoming a wife, a woman looses her identity. Great work!

A very powerful and heartfelt story. Thanks for posting it.

Heartbreaking and relatable nicolejess, the little details really make this

Such a sad piece. I can relate to the story and I am sure others will too. Great writing.

Oh, and thanks for your kind comments on my story.

This was so emotional, I felt and understood your pain. Great writing.

Great characters Bryony Harrison, any chance you could expand on this?

No, I only intended it to be a short piece, but I am glad that you enjoyed reading it.