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    Nice poem. It gets quite powerful at the end, you know? I like it.

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    Hannah Marie, 24 is old, in Polly's world!
    Now 49 (Ahem!) Now that's old...

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    I like this, it's very well written. Great stuff Valcifer.

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    Thanks for spotting the typo, Hannah Marie! Glad to hear you're enjoying the story too.

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    Thank you, Lianne. It has taken me months to get this opening how I wanted it. I am quite pleased with it, too.

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    Thank you for your feedback Hannah. You should like this book.

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    You have an elaborate and intriguing way of writing, your descriptions have a philosophical edge which really compliments the story.

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    thank you Hannah Marie

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    Great poem Kelly Jean Rice, the imagery works really well and is really powerful.

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    A very descriptive poem Kelly Jean Rice. I like the imagery in this poem.

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    thanks thats why i need you guys

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    ack my stupi I'ves ive's wtf i hate that word

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    There is a lot of mystery within this story and it works with what little is said about who the character is and what she has been doing.

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    thank you Hannah Marie, I like to know that I left out floweriness, that is a good thing, thanks.

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    yeah? I am so weirded out by that because I wish people didn't have to feel that way. Alexandra Neon

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    This is so powerfully emotional - I think many people can relate to these feelings of self worth and being unable to help themselves.

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    Prison seems to give everyone a different perspective. Granted, some a bit more twisted than others.

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