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Thomas Heasman-Hunt
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LostViolet
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Derec Jones
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  • Derec Jones avatar

    Red-Dog Thank you for taking the time to read and thanks for the comment :)

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Stephanie Ellis
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Miko 72
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Jim Wilde
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Neil Davies
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  • Joey T avatar

    It could do with a shorten, but thanks for sharing this story Neil Davies - it's a gooden!

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Sciwriter
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  • Joey T avatar

    Thanks for sharing Sciwriter - keep em coming!

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writergeorge
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  • Joey T avatar

    Thanks for sharing writergeorge - great idea and an engaging storyline.

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writergeorge
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  • Joey T avatar

    Needs to be shortened a bit, but it's a great concept! thanks for sharing!

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writergeorge
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  • Joey T avatar

    I agree with the statement below - it needs to be shortened, but has great potential, thank you for sharing this!

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writing_dancer
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    Thank you to every one for reading and for the tips and feedback. Much appreciated!

  • Joey T avatar

    Thanks for this upload writing_dancer, was short and easy to read - 5 mins well spent!

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Ainsley Whitfield
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Jim Wilde
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Sciwriter
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    Another well-written installment Sciwriter

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Riccardson Turnbull
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    Thanks for the heads up Red-Dog.

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    Intriguing piece, Riccardson Turnbull, I'd be curious to read more!

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Ben Wetzel
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Stephanie Ellis
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    This was a really interesting story, you really capture what hard times these people faced.

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trumble
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BambiGirl
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    Shocking ending BambiGirl, and great description, it really made the piece.

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Ben Wetzel
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  • Fantasy
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Sciwriter
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the steephillhermit
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    Interesting start, a little confusing but I expect this will become clearer when you've finished it.

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    Sounds interesting so far, I look forward to reading more

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BloodRed Geisha
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