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thenotsosecretpoet
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  • jeff mantel avatar

    Nice piece but a few too many run-on sentences, especially in the opening Redheaded_Dancer

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Erick
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Elizabeth Larsen
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Elizabeth Larsen
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  • doceft avatar

    Thanks Melissa Smith. They were.

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    I really liked this, you can tell these are fond memories.

  • doceft avatar

    Yeah, it really is surprising that so many of us made it out of childhood alive back then. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Red-Dog.

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  • doceft avatar

    I'm glad you enjoyed the story, Hannah Marie.

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  • Pia Lou avatar

    Lovely poem, I really enjoyed your rhyming scheme.

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  • Sheepyblue avatar

    Enjoyable story, felt quite realistic

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  • Emsy avatar

    I am not a fan of dinosaurs but I like your straight to the point story.

  • Alexandra Neon avatar

    Well that was ... different. Poor Spinosaurus - all for a bit of fish!

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    Interesting story juju. I'd like to know why the t-rex was angry with the spinosaurus.

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    Actually it's scary Tom Baker. Thank you for reading it. Job done.

  • Tom Baker avatar

    Aw that's very sweet juju

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  • jeff mantel avatar

    A nice, simple story livelaughlove

  • Pia Lou avatar

    Lovely story and collaboration! Just be careful to capitalize Little Bear every time, as it's his name.

  • Tom Baker avatar

    Sweet story livelaughlove but yeah, could do with toning down a little to children!

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  • jeff mantel avatar

    A nice story livelaughlove but you could definitely expand on it

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    Thank you! Tamsin Emma

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    Lovely story with a nice message livelaughlove. I enjoyed reading this, good stuff.

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  • jeff mantel avatar

    Nice and thoughtful livelaughlove, will you be adding more to this piece then?

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  • LianneGraziella avatar

    Great work, I really enjoyed reading this! Very amusing and very relate-able.

  • jeff mantel avatar

    Very funny Barbara Walker, although it does need a proofread

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Derek Jensen
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  • jeff mantel avatar

    Do you ever read these comments Jobella Ortix?

  • Alex Hamilton avatar

    Good start, wonder where you intend to take this...

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    I live in Bangalore, India .. Born and raised in Kerala, India :)

  • Christina Ar avatar

    I am from Cyprus, but I live in Uk! How about you Ashwin Shanker ?

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    im amazed how stories from across the globe reach each other .... where u from Christina Ar ?

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    Thank u very much Christina Ar ... There are soooo many ways our children surprise us right??

  • Christina Ar avatar

    Oh such a sweet little boy! :) I so much enjoyed your story Ashwin Shanker !

  • Alexandra Neon avatar

    What an amusing story! It's short, sweet and I really like the idea of a vegetable cake - what a funny revenge!

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  • Tom Baker avatar

    Great story Melle Rubies, evocative and well written. Any more personal pieces?

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