Short but poignant - very big well done!

This is really good, short and to the point. It would be great if you continued this, I'd like to see where it goes! Great work!

Gripping little story, I enjoyed reading this.

This is great! I don't really like chem much but I'm excited to read more!!

A well told story with a very believable character, excited to read more! :)

nyc storytelling lianne

I love the description of the friend's legs extending up into her arm pits. Hilarious. Lots of energy. I'll read more!

Interesting cliffhanger at the end!

The two characters are set up really well, and I definitely know the feeling portrayed by the narrator. Interested to see where this goes!

Nice writing. The opening was good, drew you in straight away. Looks like you've got something going here.

Nice opening, zippy and makes you want to read more, well done! Very expert use of dialogue too!

this is excellent

That was pretty good. I love the character descriptions. All I can say though is poor Ava

Great beginning. I got into the characters immediately.

Very nice, a well structured easy read that makes the reader want to continue.

Very nice! I like how it was plotted and written. Keep it up :)

I like this chapter. It's very direct and to the point and for me, the winning word was 'scientifically'. Great word choices.

great like the last line. Know the feeling.

Well, I'm glad to know that for once, it isn't me; computers and yours truly mix about like intelligence and yours truly!

Great chapter, looking forward to reading more.

Very nice! Now, I have to keep reading the next chapters!

Very mysterious- looking forward to some weird and embarrassing procedures!

Love this!

I really enjoyed your story. Your dialogues are realistic and very entertaining. Your writing is very refreshing!Well done!

Bit of a tease ending., orf to read the next instalment,

Lovely impactful beginning. Look forward to the next instalment.

I love the characterization in this! Your characters really pop! Wonderfully written and clear!

Interesting and well written - I look forward to reading more of this!

hahaha :)) I liked it! This is sort of something I go through every month and I relate. Good job!

This story is funny. I guess the stain won the war.

Great dramatisation of a stubborn stain! Tell me, is this a metaphor of any kind?

Maybe it's blood. Tun tun tuuuuuun!

Fascinating built-up of the story. Great writing, and your descriptions of her obsessive behaviour is captivating. Well done!

Really cool piece of writing - thanks for sharing

The writing is very clever and enjoyable. I think the title and the story doesn't mesh quite well though.

Great twist at the end - nice work!

Narration wise, brilliant. Subject wise, even better.

James Hampton Another touching, elegiac story

Robin Lord Thanks for the feedback. I may be able to re-look at this story in late July.

Alex Hamilton Joey T Thanks to both of you for your appreciation.

Very good again, thanks for sharing.

Very well written story.

There's a sinister note to the ending I think, which I guess fits in with the general tone of the story. Thanks for sharing!

Read this NOW so you can say you were one of the first when it hits your telly box! Fantastic work Mr Ney!

Thanks for sharing this - it made for a pretty decent little read and I shall return for more!

Really enjoyed this. Cant wait to read some more.

Really enjoyed reading this. You've written this incredibly well, great stuff.

Yep... working now.

This doesn't seem to be working on my laptop... can anybody else see the whole submission?

interesting read .. empathizing ... powerful ,,

This was a great read. Stayed up enjoying it.

Yes. Just, yes.

This is a really cool story, I'm glad I found it!

I liked this story a lot because it had a real sense of authenticity to it. I like the idea of it being based during WW1.

Really enjoyed this story. I found a typo on page 5 though - "It mist be morning".

Beautiful. Emotional. Heart-breaking. Did the wife die? Thanks for sharing this.

This was really good, i enjoyed it a lot and it's very emotional. Thanks for sharing!

Really powerful piece of writing hideb - thanks for sharing it.

Thank you Ashwin Shanker glad you enjoyed it

Amaaaaaazzing read Mr Antoni ... Great dialogues and pace ... Brilliant (y)

Thank you the roaming shepherd

awesome story loved it has a great end nice writing

Thank you Hannah Marie

Thank you for reading Joey T

Thank you for the feedback Tom Baker

Thank you john paul the second for your feedback and staff pick nomination

in fact. Staff Picks . but put a picture on it.

I really like the way you write. I enjoyed reading this. I think you do something well with your character motivations and conflicts.

This is a great ride! You give us just enough detail to keep us going - has a really cool film noir feel to it. Thanks for uploading!

extremely well written the transition and flow of story is very smooth you surely should expand this too something thrilling i would buy it

Great ending. Loved this dark tale. Well paced, well written. Thanks for sharing this story.

What a fascinating story. Sounds like spies and Why is the book so important? What does it contain? Well written and engaging.

Katrina Allardyce Thanks for the kind words. Glad you like it:)

Excellent writing and keeps the readers interest like a vice!

Thanks for all your comments! Really appeciate it :)

Really imaginative stuff! I'll also recommend for Staff Picks !

me likey. will there be more

Woow! Very good! I enjoyed it very much!

Ed Harley Thanks for the feedback!

Sharp and creepy all the way through. I especially enjoyed the part where she realized it was awfully quiet for a hospital.

Agh! Cliches! Why oh why can I never recognise them???? Thanks guys and gals.

uh...can i say original lol

Hannah Marie- Uncut? Not if David has anything to do with it!

Pffft. Had me snorting with laughter for quite a while, this did. Lord did David bump his head somewhere?

Susan Anne Lee Thank you : )

liked this simple but poignant

Amr Khorkhash Thank you : )

A great read indeed ! :) Staff Picks

Hannah Marie Thank you : )

Very metaphorical and thoughtful piece piece Alan Scott, works very well at conveying its message.

Very vivid. I think you did a good job communicating and writing for an audience.

Joey T Thank you

Alan Scott great story bro!

Sheepyblue Thank you : ) I know its a bit heavy handed but that was what the lady wanted.

Good piece, what you're trying to convey comes across well.

Enjoyed your story

An unexpected, but lovely story. Enjoyed the ending very much.

That ending was a nice touch, really enjoyed your story.

Nice work, Paul. It's gentle, touching and funny all at the same time.

Finally a story of the week that I really liked!

First Class read Paul. The characterisation and imagery were superb and the ending was the icing on the cake. Masterful piece mate.

Wonderful x

A delightfully gentle story with a... not a twist, but rather a tweak at the end. Thank you

LOLOL!! Loved it. Recommending it on FB.

A wonderfully light story with a great little twist at the end.

A very interesting read and even more interesting twist at the end.

A great read :)

This was a great read. Very pleased to have read it.

A very good story and most enjoyable! Well done.

I really like your story. It is more ironic than amusing. She is a nice lady too, is how I see it.

Nice twist at the end Paul and I also liked the way you got a link in to your blog! I must try that. Good work.

Very clever little tale with a most amusing ending. Nicely done.

This was remarkably funny. Unique, and quirky. Nice.

Very well written. I don't get it though, which makes me feel stupid. Sorry.

Well that caught me off guard. I agree with Ed Harley - very sharp indeed.

That was great :-)

Hahaha! Fantastic story Paul Bassett Davies . The ending is brilliant!

I think I'll remember this story- that's such a funny scene to picture- sharp!

Thanks again for another great story Paul Bassett Davies

Excellent stuff!

Awesome story Thomas. Great ending as well

Looks interesting! I love the concept!

Well written. I felt like I was looking over her shoulder squinting after that shadow of a girl friend.

A very enjoyable read, good work!

Great stuff! Looking forward to more!

Smooth narrative flow. I wanted to know a few more details about the planet and aliens. Good Sci/Fi write.

I really enjoyed reading this! In fact I'm recommending it for Staff Picks.

Really good stuff Kimberly Karlone, nice descriptions and world building

Claude, I loved this; and the ending...wow!

I really enjoyed this, it is really lovely. Great stuff MD Maurice

Wonderful and warm, a very sincere and touching read!

Joey T Joey, thanks so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! As I said to Hannah, I'm honored!

Really beautiful story Claude Nougat - I'd second that recommendation.

Jack Durish Thanks Jack, and this is an exciting new site, easy to navigate, I like it very much!

Welcome to the ReadWave club. This is an excellent entre

mummymummy Mysterious and hilarious all at once, fantastic stuff! Please share more!

I enjoyed the manner in which you constructed the situation, with logic, tempo and a bit of whimsy. You definitely have skill.

Really enjoyed this Alexandra Neon. It's a great read and very well written. Good stuff.

Thanks for the recommendation Claude Nougat

Love it! I recommend it for Staff Picks

LOL. This was funny. Like the beginning about the customers at Starbucks. The ending was funny.

Carried me along without a pause... smashing end! I think we have all felt the same way one time or another standing in a line waiting....

Very witty with lots of humor . Well writen . I have on occasions had the frothy tache . Damn you starbucks

I think I liked this ages ago, but just didn't comment. Anyway, enjoyable story, humorous and relatable. Realistic too.

i like your sense of humor and the jaunty flow in your narration. very well-written.

Recommended for Staff Picks, in fact!

Is that better? What do others think?

Haha, this story was wonderful. Short, witty and very amusing, I really enjoyed reading it.

This is very well done and your protagonist is real and somewhat true. Nice build up and pace is well developed too. Look forward to more.

Haha a very unusual moment. Loved the sense of awkwardness.